精選答案（1）韓國(guó)是中國(guó)的近鄰，經(jīng)濟(jì)貿(mào)易交流發(fā)達(dá)。韓國(guó)作為經(jīng)濟(jì)強(qiáng)國(guó)，擁有著發(fā)達(dá)的教育水平和先進(jìn)的教育模式，而建國(guó)大學(xué)具有悠久的歷史和強(qiáng)大的師資力量，因此我選擇了在貴校留學(xué)深造。
（2） 因此國(guó)際貿(mào)易在競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈的今天顯得是如此的重要.
（3）所以這就更增加了我學(xué)習(xí)國(guó)際貿(mào)易的渴望和動(dòng)力. 因此我真誠(chéng)的希望能在貴校得到這一領(lǐng)域的進(jìn)一步深造.
(4)任何學(xué)科都需要良好的理論基礎(chǔ)才能進(jìn)一步的研究并運(yùn)用于實(shí)踐當(dāng)中,所以我研究生第一年的主要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)國(guó)際貿(mào)易的相關(guān)基本理論和知識(shí),并深入了解主要貿(mào)易國(guó)的貿(mào)易體制與政策;
（5)國(guó)際貿(mào)易中的絕大多數(shù)信息的發(fā)布、交流、磋商、談判、單證、文件等都是以英語(yǔ)為主，而且都是非常專業(yè)和正式的英語(yǔ),所以在研究學(xué)習(xí)的過(guò)程中,在加強(qiáng)商務(wù)韓語(yǔ)的同時(shí)還將會(huì)更加加強(qiáng)商務(wù)英語(yǔ)的學(xué)習(xí).
(6)由于從事國(guó)際貿(mào)易活動(dòng)，要求貿(mào)易人員在掌握基本知識(shí)的同時(shí)，必須具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)際工作能力,所以我第二年的學(xué)習(xí)將以如何把理論知識(shí)運(yùn)用到實(shí)踐當(dāng)中為研究重心.主要通過(guò)案例分析或者到海關(guān)、進(jìn)出口公司參觀訪問(wèn)或?qū)嵙?xí)的方式來(lái)提高自身實(shí)際操作水平。
（7）因?yàn)閲?guó)際貿(mào)易作為綜合性很強(qiáng)的一門專業(yè)課，和其他相關(guān)學(xué)科聯(lián)系很緊密，所以在我學(xué)習(xí)研究國(guó)際貿(mào)易的同時(shí)還將會(huì)注意學(xué)習(xí)如價(jià)格學(xué)、商品學(xué)、物流學(xué)、保險(xiǎn)學(xué)和法學(xué)等學(xué)科的知識(shí).
（8）假如貴校接受了我的申請(qǐng)，我將會(huì)以成為貴校引以為豪的畢業(yè)生為目標(biāo)，全力以赴、高質(zhì)量的完成學(xué)業(yè)，我有信心能做到。
(1) Korea Republic is a Chinese close neighbour , economy trade exchanges flourish. Korea Republic is owning developed educational level and the advanced education pattern as the economy powerful country,but strength building up a country learning have age-old history and big and powerful teachers enthusiastically, I have chosen therefore in expensive school study abroad pursuing advanced studies.
(2) international trade is competing therefore fierce look like being so-called importance today.
(3) reason why will have increased my aspiration studying international trade's and driving force more immediately. I hope going a step further being able to get this one field in expensive school therefore sincerely pursuing advanced studies. And any
(4) discipline requiring that fine rationale ability goes a step further study and apply to practice middle, therefore my graduate student the first years of major task are fundamental theory and knowledge studying the international trade relevance, go deep into trade system and policy knowing the main trade country;
(5) Information announcing , exchange, consult about most in international trade , negotiation , Shan certificate , document etc. all are to give first place to English, being extraordinary special field and formal English and , will be able to reinforce English study about of business affairs more therefore in the process of the study about studying, while reinforcing business affairs Han language.
(6)Use personal influence since being engaged in international trade , demand the trade personnel while having an ABC in hand , must have the very strong actual service ability, therefore my second year of study about will take how to apply theory knowledge to practice middle as the centre of gravity studying. Main operation is horizontal by the fact that case improves oneself reality coming the way analysing or paying a visit to customhouse , the import and export corporation pay a visit to or practice.
(7) that the comprehensiveness is very strong because of international trade accomplishes one door specialized courses, and relevance discipline connection is other very rapid and intense, therefore will be able to pay attention to the discipline studying if price learns , the commodity learns , logistics learns , Insurance and science of law wait's while I learn studying international trade knowledge.
(8) checks application having accepted me suppose expensive , I will may take the graduate who becomes expensive school enough to make oneself proud as target, go all out , high mass be completed self's studies, I am confident to be able to achieve.
這樣就可以了。